SSS #5 – Untitled (Again)

Back again with the same (still untitled) story as last week…only a little farther ahead.  I figure doing it this way will keep me motivated to finish it.


The Six:

Sadie and Markus stood side by side in the silent, empty house, listening to the sounds of their allies’ departure.  A new heaviness fell over Markus’ heart as the reality of their situation sank in.  They were alone again.  The hunters drew closer with each breath.  Right now, there were no guarantees of safety, no promises; no tomorrows.

Without second thought, Markus pulled Sadie against him and kissed her.


Where to go for more:

Check out the Six Sentence Sunday Blog for a complete list of participants!

And read the full first chapter here!


23 responses to “SSS #5 – Untitled (Again)

  1. Great use of language there! I hope they make it through the night.

  2. Love that he took the opportunity when danger was all around to kiss her. Shows his priorities are right! Great six, Siobhan!

  3. Great six! Hope they see tomorrow and get the chance to explore more of each other because of that kiss.

  4. Wow, very good. Love it.

  5. Ahh, see…hot….danger and lust….(well kiss…but I’m calling it a lust …. lol) totally hot 😛

  6. Nice, nice. Hmm, what will happen after the kiss? 🙂

  7. I would have done the same! Great six!

  8. What Marcus did makes sense. When all else fails and you might die, kiss the girl

  9. That’s a GREAT set up. Wonderful six!

  10. Great time to go in for the kiss! Nice job building up to that moment. More to come? Sensational six!

  11. Kiss her while you can. I love that.

  12. That’s right, Markus. Seize the moment!

  13. Nothing like feeling alone in the world to make you reach out…

  14. “No promises; no tomorrow.” The depth of those words touches me. Great post!

  15. Pingback: SSS #6 – Untitled (Again-Again) « Beautiful Mistakes

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